Home Page
This was the first version of the homepage for mobile. Its already reasonably well resolved because its just based off the desktop version so all the same information was ready to go.
These two are both the current home page, they just show two of the different previous events. You can click the buttons to see a different image from a previous event.About
This is the about page, again pretty much fully resolved due to it just being altered slightly from the desktop website.Get Prepared
This is the get prepared page, the blue arrows will open with more information when you click on them, as seen below.
Staying in Touch
This place is relatively similar to the previous page, once again the arrows open to show text.
Tim's feedback:
- Nav bar needs to be bigger
- Make sure text is relevant to our theme
- The black home page against the white of the other pages is a little jarring
- About page currently only shows the gnomes when you first click. Needs some indication that you can scroll down
- add the % sign to the text under the symbols on about page in case the image doesn't load
- Make sure the quote on the about page is within the grid
Our critique:
- Have underlines instead of overlines on Nav bar
- Make the font size smaller
- Make the leading bigger
- Needs a splash of colour on each page, try colouring some text in zombie hand colour
Johnny Critique:
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